Question

【题目】书面表达

在我们的成长过程中，总有许多人给我们帮助和鼓励。回顾其中的许多点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请你用英文给他/她写一封信，和他（她）说说感激的心里话。要点提示：1. 短文应包括图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯。

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名

3.词数 80字左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数）

Dear Mr./Mrs.Wang,

I am leaving junior middle school and I have so many words from my heart to say. I am just writing ________________________________________________________________________________________

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yours

LiLei

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr./Mrs.Wang,

I am leaving junior middle school and I have so many words from my heart to say.

Since you became my English teacher three years ago, you’ve always been working hard. I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are. You’re strict with us in study and also take care of us kindly. All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years. I still remember when I failed in an exam, you encouraged me to keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you told me to be brave.

Because of your help, many students, including me, are more and more interested in English and make much progress, too. You have given me so much.

Yours,

LiLei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者主要写三年的校园生活的回忆，全文所用时态有一般现在时态、一般过去时态，一般将来时态，还有现在完成时态。

写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如from my heart ，be strict with,take care of ,get on well with ,each other等短语，文中还用到了时间状语从句 when I failed in an exam, When I had trouble in life,Since you became my English teacher three years ago；宾语从句 I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are.， All my classmates agree we get on well with each other for these years；感叹句 how interesting your lessons are，how friendly you are.多种时态运用自如，例如现在完成进行时you’ve always been working hard，一般将来时I won't forget，一般过去时when I failed in an exam.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。