Question

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。

过去	生活贫困，房屋破旧。 污染严重，垃圾遍地。
现在	生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人有自己的汽车； 环境变得更漂亮了。 旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。
将来	希望……（两点）

The Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small,

 

Answer 1

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere.

Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. People live a better life. Their houses are large ad bright. Many people have owned cars. Every year, thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit our city.

I hope we can how wider roads and more sports courts .I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，可按照时间顺序来写，注意要点的齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

【亮点分析】

这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有许多实用的表达方式Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown.现在，家乡发生了巨大的改变。Take place发生； more and more beautiful越来越漂亮； thousands of成千上万； all over the world世界各地；better and better越来越好；in the future 在将来；等等。

考点：提纲类作文。