Question

书面表达(本大题共10分)

假设你叫刘涛，给美国的笔友Jack写信，向他介绍你在初三的学习生活:

要点：1. 目前你忙于学习，几乎在学习上没有取得大的进步。

2. 虽然你时常感到压力，但你相信充足的睡眠会有帮助，所以总是仔细计划你的每一天。

3. 父母在学习上对你很严格，他们不允许花时间做别的事情，你对此感到很糟。

4. 你认为……

注意：1. 第四要点的内容须用2-3句话作适当的发挥。

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

3. 词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. I’m so busy with studies__________________________________________

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Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Liu Tao

 

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. I’m so busy with studies that I hardly has made great progress in my study. Although I feel stressed at times. I believe enough sleep can be helpful so I always plan my day carefully. My parents are very strict with me in my studies. They don’t allow me to do anything else. I feel bad about that .I think it’s necessary to have some time for my hobbies. I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies.

Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Liu Tao

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们介绍我的初三的学习生活。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括四部分的内容。一是目前我忙于学习，几乎在学习上没有取得大的进步。二是虽然我时常感到压力，但我相信充足的睡眠会有帮助，所以总是仔细计划我的每一天。三是父母在学习上对我很严格，他们不允许花时间做别的事情，我对此感到很糟。四是我自己的观点想法。要求第四要点的内容须用2-3句话作适当的发挥。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: I’m so busy with studies that I hardly has made great progress in my study. Although I feel stressed at times. 短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I think it’s necessary to have some time for my hobbies. I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies.内容比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。

考点：提纲类作文。