Question

【题目】作文。

谈谈目前青少年在家庭和学习生活中存在的问题或压力，以及如何去解决问题、排解压力，根据要求写一篇70词左右的短文：

要求：从以下提示中任意选取3个方面谈谈（学业、功课、课外学习、友谊、父母的关系及期盼等）导致睡眠、心情、脾气等方面的问题，每方面至少提出一条建议。

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone has stress,including me. My stress comes from many parts in my life. My study bring me too much stress.My parents said if I don't study well,I won't have a good future. So I have to do much homework and have many after-class classes.They may expect me to be the best in the world. I feel so terrible. I can't sleep well and worry about everything. I get a bad temper.Now I think of some ideas to deal with stress.First, I think I should talk to someone about my problem. Second,I should take exercise to relax myself. Third, when I'm stressed, I can eat something or listen to music to calm down.

【解析】

试题分析：首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要从三个部分阐述，压力，压力的影响以及如何解决压力。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，三个部分内容衔接自然，清晰简明地表达了自己的压力是什么，给自己带来的影响和如何解决压力的三个看法。语言准确、丰富、流畅。注意了上下文衔接词的使用，表达观点时层次分明。结合书本所学内容，运用书本所学的语言表达技能很好完成了写作任务。