Question

今天是4月20号，星期六，天气晴朗。你和你的同学制定了一个春游的计划。因为自行车不仅可以避免交通拥挤而且可以节约能源并且不会造成空气污染，你们决定骑自行车去公园玩。你们骑到那儿大约用了一个小时时间。公园很大，充满了绿树和鲜花，你们在游玩中获得了乐趣。希望下次能再去游玩。

根据以上内容和所给的英语提示写一篇70词左右的日记，记述今天的经历。

（提示词：make a plan, save energy（能源）, air pollution, ride to, be full of）

Saturday, April 20th Sunny

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Saturday, April 20th Sunny

Today I am very excited because my classmates and I made a plan to trip. We decided to go there by bike. Because the bicycle can ‘t only avoid the traffic congestion but also can save energy, and it does not cause air pollution. We decide to ride our bikes to the park. It took me about an hour to get there. The park is very big. There are full of green trees and flowers. We had a rest and had a picnic. Some classmates were singing and dancing, the others were playing games. At about four in the afternoon we came back home. I felt tired but happy. I want to go there again.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。