Question

童年是难忘的，有快乐、有悲伤。请你以“Childhood Memories”为题，写一篇短文，和大家一起分享你童年中的喜怒哀乐吧！词数：80左右
温馨提示：childhood n. 童年
Childhood Memories
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Answer 1

I remember my childhood just like yesterday. There was a river around our village. When summer came, I often swam there with my friends. We played with water, and sometimes caught fishes. When we felt tired, we had fun looking for something to eat in the field nearby. Once we were found to pick tomatoes, the farmer shouted to us while we ran away as fast as possible. At that time, I had nothing to worry about. But now, everything has changed!
Goodbye, my childhood! How I wish I could meet you again!)

解析试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。由于是介绍自己的童年，故人称主要是第一人称。
考点：命题作文的写作
点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。