Question

文段表达

根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍你父亲(或母亲)的情况，表达你的感激之情，并谈谈准备为他(或她)生日做哪些有意义的事。

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One possible version： 　　My mother’s birthday is on May 25．As you know, she is an English teacher in a middle school．She also looks after the family carefully．However she never thinks about herself．I’m lucky to have such a good mother．I love her and thank her for doing so much for me．Her birthday is coming．To give her a surprise, I decide to do something special for her on that day．I’ll help to do some housework so that she could have a good rest after work．Besides, I’ll make a birthday card by myself and give it to her on that day to show my love and thanks． 　　书面表达评分标准： 　　第一档：(15～13分)完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 　　第二档：(12～9分)基本符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 　　第三档：(8～5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 　　第四档：(4～0分)与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。