Question

同学们，你们喜欢看Jackie Chan的电影吗?请根据提供的信息以My favourite actor Jackie Chan 为题写一篇作文，文章的开头已给出，不计入词数。

Personal details
Date of birth	7th April 1954
Place of birth	Hong Kong
Characters	humorous, never give up easily
Problems	not enough time for his family, feel tired
Award	Golden Horse Award for Best Actor (1993)
Dreams
Moving to Mars	no pollution, more space, …
Owning a robot	wash the dishes, cook meals, …
Wishes
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要求：1. 包含表格提供的全部信息并适当发挥；    
2. 条理清楚、符合逻辑，90词左右。
My favourite actor Jackie Chan
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Answer 1

My favorite actor Jackie Chan
My favorite actor is Jackie chan. He was born in Hong Kong on 7th April 1954. He has a big nose and putting on grand AIRS eyes. He has no outstanding appearance, but had a kind heart and friendly smile. He works hard and never gives up. But he has no enough time for his family and always feels tired. In 1993, he was given the Golden Horse Award for Best Actor. He wishes to go to the Mars one day, because it is a place which has no pollution and has more space. He also wishes to have a robot to help him to wash the dishes and cook meals.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己最喜欢的影星成龙。结合所给材料，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，注意主谓一致问题。句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: be born in出生在……；give up放弃；连词but但是等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。