Question

书面表达  (本大题共10分)
1. 失明影响全世界约数百万人。过去很多病人没钱进行治疗。
2. ORBIS帮助有眼疾的人。它使用飞行眼科医院访问贫穷国家，
3. 到现在为止，已有很多当地医生和护士在飞行眼科医院学习了眼科手术，了解到了新的技术和知识。
4. 大多数眼科问题都能被现代医学治愈。ORBIS医生们对帮助他们感到很自豪。
5. 我们希望……
要求: 1.内容必须包括上表中的要点；
2.条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.第5点用2-3句话进行发挥。
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Answer 1

Blindness affects millions of people around the world.In the past, many patients have no money for treatment. ORBIS is an international charity that helps people with eye problems. Most eye problems can be cured or prevented. But many patients are so poor that they can’t afford to go to hospital. So the ORBIS doctors use a flying eye hospital to help them. They do operations on the plane. The plane is also used as teaching centre, the ORBIS doctors can teach local doctors and nurses new skills and knowledge.  Many people are very grateful to ORBIS. I think we can support their work by sending donations to them.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在及将来时态进行叙述，注意主谓一致及时间状语与时态的一致问题。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: millions of成千上万的；so……that如此……以至于等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。