Question

在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去庆丰敬老院开展“学雷锋, 送温暖”活动。假如你是志愿者学生张杰，请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友Kevin，与他分享你的美好经历。
活动内容见下表:

活动时间	3月5日
活动地点	庆丰敬老院（Qingfeng Old People’s Home）
参加人员	学校志愿者
活动形式	1. 送去鲜花和水果 2. 帮助打扫卫生 3. 陪老人唱歌、跳舞、聊天 4. 送去美好祝愿 5. ……
活动感想	关爱老人，尊重（respect）老人

 要求：
1. 短文应包括表中所有要点, 可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 文章不少于80词。开头、结尾已给出。
Dear Kevin,
Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.
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If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Yours,  
Zhang Jie

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Kevin,
Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.
As soon as we volunteers got to Qingfeng Old People’s Home, they gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the old people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. The old people were very excited. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness. But I felt it our duty to care for the old people and respect them.
If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.
Yours, 
Zhang Jie

试题分析：本文内容要求你以张杰的身份给笔友Kevin写一封信，说说你在在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去庆丰敬老院开展“学雷锋, 送温暖”活动的情况。所以应该用第一人称we，一般过去时。根据汉语提示，灵活采用不同的表达方式将活动内容和个人感受等各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】本文是一封信，内容是描写作为志愿者参加一次“学雷锋, 送温暖”活动的经历。以时间先后为序，用，不错。用一个短语As soon as说明一开始受到的欢迎。用里一系列的动词短语来说明做的事。最后用了感叹句How happy we were!. When引导的时间状语从句等较复杂的句子。
考点: 提纲类作文。