Question

同学们，在你们成长的过程中，想到过母亲的付出吗？请写一篇60—80词左右的小短文，描述母亲为你做的事和你的感受。以下提示词仅供参考。

cook meals, wash clothes, read books to…, go hiking with…, happy, exciting

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

My mother is always the busiest in my family. She does a lot for me and my whole family. She does most of the housework, such as cooking meals, washing clothes and so on. When I was still a little child, she read stories to me every night before I went to sleep. And she often took me to parks, zoos and other places to have fun. I am thankful to her for everything she did. I love my mother. （ 80 words）

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，由于是描述自己经历过的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态和现在完成时态，人称是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：命题作文的写作

点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。