Question

书面表达（本题有1小题；共计20分）

最近全班就“有效的英语学习方式”展开讨论。其中Mike的观点令你印象深刻。请根据以下表格要点写一篇报道，介绍他的观点，并谈谈自己的英语学习经验。短文开头已经给出。

 

Ways of Learning English
	Successful	OK / Not bad	Unsuccessful
Mike	watching English movies	reading English magazines	studying grammar
joining the English club	listening to English songs	reading textbooks
I	…	…	…

注意：1）依据你的英语学习经验，将表格补充完整；

2）报道必须包括表中所有的相应内容，可适当发挥；

3）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；

4）词数：80-100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Ways of Learning English

Recently, students in our class have had a discussion about different ways of learning English. …

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Recently, students in our class have had a discussion about different ways of learning English. Everyone was very interested in this topic and had all kinds of thoughts. Mike shared something with us. Mike said the best way to learn English was watching English movies and joining the English club. He also said reading English magazines and listening to English songs could help learn English well. But he hated studying grammar. He thought it was useless. He said studying grammar was a bad way to learn English and reading textbooks was not helpful at all. But I think there are many ways to learn English. The most important is that your way is just right for you. My favorite is to read English stories and chat with foreign friends online. It helps me a lot. What’s your opinion?

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们介绍一下迈克学习英语的观点。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括四部分的内容。一是学习成功的方法，如看英文电影，加入英语俱乐部；二是还可以的学习英语的方法如阅读英文杂志和听英语歌曲；三是学习英语不成功的方法，如研究语法和看课本。四是谈下我们自己的观点。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据表格中所列要点，客观讲述了迈克的观点，同时也清晰表达了自己的看法，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Everyone was very interested in this topic and had all kinds of thoughts. Mike shared something with us.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如The most important is that your way is just right for you. What do you think of it?等。

考点：提纲类作文。