Question

书面表达（共1题，计15分）

假如最近你和你的同学就“我们应该和父母交朋友吗？”进行了讨论。现在请你以Should we make friends with our parents?为题，参照表内所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文。

Your classmates ideas	Your ideas
1. they are too busy to talk with us	1. …
2. can’t understand us	2. …
3. have different lifestyles	3. …

注意：1.可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯；2.所写内容必须包括表格中的观点和你的至少三个观点；3.词数：不少于80词。开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；4.参考词汇：concern 关心； selflessly无私地

Should we make friends with our parents?

We have had a discussion about whether we should make friends with our parents. All the students in our class gave their idea.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Should we make friends with our parents?

We have had a discussion about whether we should make friends with our parents. All the students in our class gave their idea.

Some students think it’s impossible to make friends with their parents because they are always too busy to show their concern. They say that their parents can’t understand them. Some students even think that they have different lifestyles. But I don’t think so.

I think we should make friends with our parents because they are the dearest persons to us in the world. What’s more, they provide us with food and clothes in our daily life. They care about us selflessly. And they never ask for any return. We should often talk with them and let them know our mind and thought.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者写出就“我们可以和父母交朋友吗”自己的观点。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。小作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I think we should make friends with our parents because they are the dearest persons to us in the world. What’s more, they provide us with food and clothes in our daily life.有一些好的固定短语还有连词。

考点：考查表格类作文。