Question

书面表达

假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问，请你根据下表提示的信息，用英语向外宾简单介绍学校近年来所发生的变化，并谈谈你的感想。

注意：

1．词数不少于90。文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。

3．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　Ladies and gentlemen!It's my honor to tell you about the changes to our school．

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　　I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school．Thank you very much!

Answer 1

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解析：

Ladies and gentlemen!It's my honor to tell you about the changes to our school． 　　In the past, there was only a small playground．The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them．The number of the trees and flowers was small． 　　But things have greatly changed these years．Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts．More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round． 　　I think it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．We will work harder and serve the people better in the future． 　　I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school．Thank you very much! 　　书面表达评分标准 　　一、内容要点 　　1．陈述过去环境及设施情况(至少列举两例)； 　　2．陈述现在环境及设施情况：操场更大、篮球场更多；图书新、品种多；树木四季常青，学校美如花园…… 　　3．发表自己的感想。 　　二、评分细则 　　先根据文章整体内容和语言表达确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数。 　　第五档(15－13分) 　　完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，字数达标，基本或完全没有语言错误。 　　第四档(12－l0分) 　　符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，信息较完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 　　第三档(9－7分) 　　基本符合题目要求，表达不够清楚，信息不够完整，语言欠通顺，有部分语言错误，影响整体理解。 　　第二档(6－4分) 　　部分内容符合题目要求，内容不完整，表达不清楚，信息不完整，有较多语言错误，所写内容难以理解。 　　第一档(3－0分) 　　与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语。