Question

4．Writing at least 60 words on the topic"Better habits，Better life"．
（请你以"培养良好习惯，打造美好生活"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）．
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
The following questions are for your reference（以下信息仅供参考）：
1．What bad habits do you have in your life？
2．How do they affect（影响） your life？
3．How will you change your bad habits？
Habits，whether good or bad，will influence one's life．We should especially pay attention to our bad habits，like rudeness，laziness，lying，and stealing．Personally，depending on smart phones too muchis one of my most serious bad habits．My attentionshave been drawn awayby playing games，chatting online，watching movies and listening to musicso thatI lost enough chance to communicate with my families．Now，I come to realize its harm and decide to get rid of the habit．From now on，I will turn off my phone when it's unnecessary and go outside to do more exercise．If I cultivate good self-control，I amcertain togain great effect．In short，good habitshelp us be betterand bad onesmake us worse，so try hard toform good habits and keep far frombad ones．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Now，I come to realize its harm and decide to get rid of the habit．现在，我意识到了它的危害，并决定改掉这个习惯．come to realize 表示意识到；decide to do sth表示决定做某事．
②From now on，I will turn off my phone when it's unnecessary and go outside to do more exercise．从现在起，我会在没有必要的时候关掉我的手机，到外面多做运动．句子中From now on表示从今以后；when在这里引导一个时间状语从句；do more exercise多做运动．

解答 Habits，whether good or bad，will influence one's life．（引出话题）We should especially pay attention to our bad habits，like rudeness，laziness，lying，and stealing．（生活中的坏习惯）Personally，depending on smart phones too much is one of my most serious bad habits．My attentions have been drawn away by playing games，chatting online，watching movies and listening to music so that I lost enough chance to communicate with my families．（我生活中出现的坏习惯）Now，I come to realize its harm and decide to get rid of the habit．（高分句型）From now on，I will turn off my phone when it's unnecessary and go outside to do more exercise（高分句型）．If I cultivate good self-control，I am certain to gain great effect．（我如何改变我的坏习惯）In short，good habits help us be better and bad ones make us worse，so try hard to form good habits and keep far from bad ones．（结束语）

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