Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，正在参加英语夏令营。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你在夏令营的活动及收获。

写作要点：

1.擅长运动，参加篮球队及比赛，学会与队友合作……

2.喜爱英语，参加“英语角”，结交新朋友；用英语交流，提高英语水平。

参考词汇：与队友合作work with the teammates;英语角the English corner

写作要求：

1.词数60-80；（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名，否则不得分；

3.所给的要点必须都用上；紧扣主题，适当发挥。

Hello, everyone!

I am Li Hua. I have learnt a lot on the English Summer Camp.

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_________________________________________________________________I think I have done a good job.

Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Hua. I have learnt a lot on the English Summer Camp.

I am good at sports, so I joined the basketball team. We had a basketball match with another team. At last our team won the match. Through the match I learned worked with the teammates. I was very happy. I love English, I joined the English Corner. I made some new friends. We got on well with each other. We talked with each other in English, it improved my English.

I think I have done a good job. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇根据汉语提示而完成的作文。根据写作要点内容可知本文主要考查一般现在时态与过去时态，人称为单数第一人称，考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

写作亮点：这篇短文简明、扼要地描述了自己在夏令营的一些活动及收获。时态运用非常准确。并且并包含了写作要点中所列举的全部信息，介绍时条理清晰，有条不紊，运用了大量的词组be good at, at last, make friends, get on well with, talk with等。可见作者的写作功底，是一篇不错的英语范文。