Question

【题目】根据所给图画，以Sally Smiled Again为题用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Sally Smiled Again

Last month, one of my classmates, Sally was sad. Her father got ill and stayed in hospital. She had to look after him. So she missed a lot of lessons. In the English exam she failed.

During those days she was worried about her father and study. When we learned about that, we decided to help her. Some classmates helped her with her study. Others took turns to care for her father.

Our monitor encouraged her to smile at life. Soon Sally caught up with her classmates in her study and her father became better and better. Sometimes she joined us in the game. Smile appeared on her face again.

【解析】这是一篇看图作文，根据所给图画，以Sally Smiled Again为题用英语写一篇短文。结合所给图画，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She had to…，So she missed…，During those days she was worried about…，we decided to…，Our monitor encouraged her to…，Sometimes she joined…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Sally因照顾生病的父亲，落下了功课，考试不及格；接下来介绍我们决定帮助她学习，照顾她的父亲；最后Sally的学习赶上了同学们，她的脸上又有了笑容。此处get ill, look after, be worried about, learn about, decide to do sth, take turns to do sth, care for, encourage sb to do sth, catch up with等这些词组的运用让文章增色不少。