Question

14．请以“My favorite teacher”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于60词的短文．标点符号不占格．
提示 （短文须包含下列要点）：
（1）What subject does your favorite teacher teach？
（2）What does he/she look like？And how about his/her personal traits（性格）？
（3）Tell a story about how he/she helped you．
（4）What do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future？
注意：短文中，老师的姓名请一律使用Mr Wang或Ms Wang，不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．（外貌）But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．（所授学科）She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．（性格）She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．（一个故事）Once my Englishwas reallypoor，Ihad no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn’t blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．（我要说的话）when wemeetinthefuture，I will say“many thanks”to her．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文所给要点是几个问题，故动笔前先要阅读要点，找出问题的答案．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态和一般过去时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．可用句型有如：be strict with对…严格；be ready to do sth准备做某事；in trouble处于困难中；try one’s best do to sth尽力做某事等

解答 My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is Ms．Wang．She is a 36-year-old woman．（外貌）But she is tall and has long straight hair．And she often wears black pants and a white shirt．（所授学科）She teaches us English．We all like listening to her．Her classes are very interesting and creative．Because she has different ways of teaching．But she is very strict with us in everything．（性格）She is warm-hearted．We all know she is always ready to help others．When we are in trouble，she can try her best to help us．（一个故事）Once my English was really poor，I had no interest about it．when she noticed this，she didn’t blame me，she told me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English，she asked me to watch English movie，it worked．（我要说的话）when we meet in the future，I will say“many thanks”to her．

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．