Question

17．亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以"My English Study"为题，
谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会．
1、要点包括：你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟；
2、字数要求：不少于80字．
My English Study
How time flies!My three-year middle school life will be over soon．Looking back I have many memories of my English study．
When I entered the middle school，I had so many difficulties with my English．I was not able to understand the teacher in class，and I couldn't master the words and phrases．For a time I wanted to give it up．Later，with the help of the teacher and my classmates，I listened to the teacher carefully in class，kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible．Step by step I made great progress in English．
In a word，only when you develop interest in studying English can youlearnit well．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己学习英语的心得体会，写作中注意从三个方面进行叙述1你在英语学习中所遇到的困难.2解决的办法．3学习感悟．通过材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称主要第一人称，用一般过去时．动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词，句式短语等．适当使用连接词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
重点短语和句型：give up放弃，with the help of在…帮助下，as much as possible尽可能多的，keep on doing sth坚持做某事，make progress进步等等

解答 My English Study
   How time flies!My three-year middle school life will be over soon．Looking back I have many memories of my English study．．（引出下文）
   When I entered the middle school，I had so many difficulties with my English．I was not able to understand the teacher in class，and I couldn't master the words and phrases．For a time I wanted to give it up．（遇到的困难） Later，with the help of the teacher and my classmates，I listened to the teacher carefully in class，kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible（高分句型）．Step by step I made great progress in English． （解决的办法）
   In a word，only when you develop interest in studying English can youlearnit well（感受）（高分句型）．

点评 此题为应用文写作．首先要仔细审题，严格按照要求去写作．其次要注意时态人称的选择；再次行文中要语句通顺，注意上下句的衔接，用英语式的思维去组织每个句子，避免受汉语的影响．采用不同的句式，尽量避免重复．注意不要出现单词，语法和时态等的错误．这样的文章就是好文章