Question

书面表达：

　　根据下面的内容写一段50～70个词的短文。要求：1．必须使用提供的关键词语；2．不能逐句翻译，语意要连贯。

　　多年前，村后山上的树木被大量砍伐，林中的白鹭飞走了。近年来，人们不再砍树，并且又栽上了许多果树。村民们富了，白鹭又飞回来了。

　　关键词语：village, mountain, cut, egret(白鹭), fly, away, plant, fruit, villager, rich,.

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Answer 1

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答案：One possible version: 　　Many years ago, there were lots of trees in the mountain behind the village. But later people began to cut them down. Things became worse since then, and the egrets in the woods had nothing to eat and flew away. These years the villagers don't cut trees any longer. Further more, they plant many fruit trees. People become rich, and the egrets fly back again. (65 words) 　　解析：仔细阅读提示短文可知，全文有三个要点：1)砍树，白鹭飞走；2)不再砍树，并且栽上了许多果树；3)村民富了，白鹭飞回来了。因此，文章要围绕这三点展开。 　　使用关键词说明各要点，适当增补词语，以使文意连贯通顺。对比提示短文和关键词，可增补如下词语：many years ago, trees in the mountain, behind the village, cut down, plant fruit trees, get rich, fly back. 　　方法提炼：短文提示性书面表达相对较易，只要在仔细阅读短文的基础上，确定文章中心内容，弄清题目要求，根据要求表达原文意思即可，但要有适当的联想，增补必要的连词和起承上启下作用的句子，切忌逐句对译。