Question

15．遵守秩序是每一个公民应该具备的良好品质．请以Rules Make Life Beautiful为题，谈谈你对遵守秩序的看法．
提示：
1．表达你对遵守秩序的看法；
2．通过描述自身的经历或你所了解的社会现象，阐明观点；
3．提出你的希望或解决办法．
要求：
1．内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.80词左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文主题为：Rules Make Life Beautiful（规则让生活更美好）
写作要点为：1．表达你对遵守秩序的看法；
2．通过描述自身的经历或你所了解的社会现象，阐明观点；
3．提出你的希望或解决办法．

解答 Possible Version One：
Rules Make Life Beautiful
Rules mean something that all the citizens should try their best to guard．
Rules are everywhere around us--in schools，families，or the streets．We must obey them because rules keep life in good order．For example，if we don't obey the traffic rules，it will cause a lot of trouble．A terrible traffic accident happened to one of my friends a few days ago because he jumped a red light．He was badly hurt．So I do hope everyone of us keeps the rules．
If life was a garden，the rules would be green fingers．They make the garden more beautiful．Possible Version Two：
Rules Make Life Beautiful
Rules tell us what we may，must or must not do in a particular situation．Rules make our life and work run smoothly．
Rules are needed everywhere in our society，even when we are playing a game．However，sometimes，people break the rules．Last term，I played soccer with my friends．Unexpectedly，David，who is a pushy guy，hit John on the head bitterly because of his losing the game，which made all of us，including our head teacher and his parents，get into a big trouble．
As you see，without rules，civilized life would be impossible．Only by obeying the rules can we live a beautiful life．

点评 考生需抓住写作要点进行写作，理清写作结构，能够对自己的看法展开分述，最好能用事实来进行例证．