Question

作文：假设你叫李明，你们班级要选拔新班长，你想向班主任王老师推荐张航。请根据表格内容，写一封80词左右的推荐信给王老师。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

姓名	张航
特长	精通电脑，擅长演讲
性格、品质	自信、勤奋、谦虚、有条理、乐于助人
个人事迹	经常花很多时间组织课外活动，从不介意为班级做额外的工作，总是尽最大努力帮助同学，深受同学们欢迎。

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

 

 

 

 

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Wang, 

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor. 

I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers.

He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school activities. 

He is very helpful too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：试题分析：这篇短文要求我们推荐张航来做我们的新班长，从三方面来介绍张航的情况。是一篇人物介绍的文章。

本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从那几个方面，一一介绍的很详细，没有遗漏任何的知识点。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I think he has some strong qualities for this position. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.等，运用了大量的固定短语，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：提纲类作文。