Question

18．假如你是某杂志社编辑Mr．Knowledgeable，根据中学生 Bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题．字数80-100，开头已给出．
Dear Knowledgeable，
My problem is that I can't get on with my family．My parents always say"no"to my ideas without any reason．So I often quarrel（吵架） with them．Also，my brother is not very nice to me．He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show．Instead，he watches whatever he wants until late at night．I don't think this is fair．At home，I always feel lonely and nervous．Is that normal？What can I do？
Bob

Dear Bob
It's normal to have these feelings．Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family？First，it's not right to quarrel with your parents．I don't think quarrelling can solve problems．You'd better have a talk with your parents．Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying"no"to your ideas．Second，Why not sit down and communicate with your brother？You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time．However，he should let you watch your favourite TV show．I hope things will be better soon．Good luck!
Knowledgeable．

Answer 1

分析 这篇作文要求我们以某杂志社编辑的身份给Bob写一封回信．首先我们必须要读懂Bob的来信，知道Bob有什么问题．根据这封信的内容可知，Bob遇到的问题是他和他的家人相处得不好，他经常跟父母吵架，和哥哥的关系也不好．因此我们要根据这一内容，帮助Bob解决他的问题，给他一些建议．这些内容需要我们自己来想象，给出的建议要符合这个情景，能对Bob起到帮助的作用．例如，我们可以建议他坐下来和父母谈一谈，把你的想法跟父母说清楚，争取获得他们的理解和支持；和自己的哥哥也要进行很好的沟通，让他知道你的意见，互相理解．在提建议的时候，我们经常用到一些句型，如why not…，you should…，you'd better…等．注意语句之间的连接，使文章表达流畅．文体是一封信，注意信的格式；因为这篇文章主要是给Bob提出一些建议，所以时态应用一般现在时；人称主要为第二人称you．

解答 答案：
Dear Bob，
It's normal to have these feelings．Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family？First，it's not right to quarrel with your parents．I don't think quarrelling can solve problems．You'd better have a talk with your parents．Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying"no"to your ideas．Second，Why not sit down and communicate with your brother？You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time．However，he should let you watch your favourite TV show．I hope things will be better soon．Good luck!
Yours，
Knowledgeable

点评 此题为材料作文．首先要仔细审题，阅读好Bob的来信先提炼出信的中心内容，才能在作文中给他提出相应的建议．提建议时可以分几条去表达，这样比较明确；文中要多使用表示提建议的句型，比如例文中的why not…，you'd better，you should等．还有使用宾语从句和时间状语从句等，也可以让文章增色不少．