Question

10．根据以下信息，用英文写一篇介绍Peter的短文．（短文开头已给出）
要点如下：
1、Peter是一名14岁的学生．他会唱歌、拉小提琴，所以他想参加音乐俱乐部；
2、Peter喜欢动物，他认为狗很友好、聪明，熊猫可爱；
3、他每天早晨6：10起床，乘坐公汽上学，路上通常花半个小时；
4、这儿有一张他的照片．看，他和弟弟正在用电脑．爸爸正在看报纸．这是快乐的一家人．
要求：
1．词数60-70词左右；
2．要求包括内容要点，语句通顺，意思连贯．
This is my good friend．
His name is Peter．He is 14 years old．He can sing and play the violin and he is good at them．So he wants to join the music club．Peter loves animals．He thinks dogs are friendly and smart．Pandas are cute．They are our friends．Peter gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning．It takes about half an hour to get to school by bus．
Here is his photo．Look!His brother and he are using a computer．His dadis reading a newspaper．This is a happy family．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
He thinks dogs are friendly and smart Pandas are cute．他认为狗是友好和聪明的熊猫是可爱的．这是一个宾语从句，He thinks 是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
高分句型二
His brother and he are using a computer．他的哥哥和他正在使用电脑．这是现在进行时，表示正在做某事．

解答 This is my good friend．His name is Peter．He is 14 years old．He can sing and play the violin and he is good at them．So he wants to join the music club【要点一，Peter是一名14岁的学生．他会唱歌、拉小提琴，所以他想参加音乐俱乐部；】．Peter loves animals．He thinks dogs are friendly and smart Pandas are cute．【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】They are our friends．【要点二，Peter喜欢动物，他认为狗很友好、聪明，熊猫可爱】Peter gets up at 6 o'clock in the morning．It takes about half an hour to get to school by bus．【要点二，他每天早晨6：10起床，乘坐公汽上学，路上通常花半个小时】
Here is his photo．Look!His brother and he are using a computer【高分句型二，注意现在进行时使用】．His dad is reading a newspaper．This is a happy family．【要点三，皮特的照片】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．