Question

根据中文意思和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的英文文段．所给英文提示词语必须都用上，中文提示内容不必逐句翻译，每组英文提示所写出的句数不限．

提示：澳大利亚学生：Sam最近又来到北京，去了王府井，发现这里发生了巨大的变化，请你以Sam的身份给父母写一张明信片，介绍……

①happy, visit, again

②change, take place

③go, Wang Fu Jing Street, morning, building, shop market

④flower, poster(宣传画), put, for, the Olympics

Answer 1

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解析：

学生：习作：Dear Dad and Mum, 　　I'm very happy to visit Beijing again, Great changes have been taken(X1) place in Beijing. I went to Wang Fu Jing Street. There were(X2) many beautiful buildings and shop markets. I saw many flowers on the street. And there are many poster(X3) put on the wall for the Olympics. 　　Your,(X4) 　　Sam 　　剖析：1．take place“发生”是不及物动词，可不用被动语态，所以此处应改为have taken． 　　2．此处表示一个客观事实，同时，从上下文可知，应用一般现在时，所以were应改为are． 　　3．there are后的主语应用复数名词，poster后应加s． 　　4．信中客套用语一般用Yours． 　　总评：此文表达基本符合要求，内容基本表达清楚，但是表达简单且有部分语言错误．