Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是林波，上周五你们学校举办了一场运动会。请根据提示及要求，以“ Our school sports meeting ”为题写一篇短文，简单介绍一下你们班参加运动会的情况。

提示：

① 班里大部分同学都参加了运动会，有的擅长跑步，有的擅长跳高、跳远；

② 好朋友Alice在跳远比赛中夺冠，并打破了校纪录；

③ Jack在400米赛跑比赛中得了第二名，比冠军只慢了三秒。

要求：

① 字迹工整，层次清晰；

② 语句通顺，语法正确；

③ 不少于70词(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

Our school sports meeting

Hi! My name is Lin Bo. Last Friday, our school held a sports meeting. _____________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school sports meeting

Hi! My name is Lin Bo. Last Friday, our school held a sports meeting. Most of my classmates took part in it and

they had great fun. Some of them were good at running and some did well in the long jump and the high jump. My best friend Alice won first place in the long jump. She jumped much farther than any other student in our school

and broke the school record. I’m proud of her !

In the 400 -meter race ,Jack wanted to get first place but he failed .He was only three seconds slower than the winner. But he said that he would try again next time .

【解析】

试题分析：短文叙述的是上周五学校举办了一场运动会的情况，所以句子用一般过去时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要使用高级词汇，所写的句子要符合英语语法，要注意上文的衔接。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：hold a sports meeting召开运动会；take part in参加；be good at擅长；be proud of以……为自豪；break the school record打破学校记录。用了that引导的宾语从句。增加了文章的亮点。