Question

书面表达。
课余时间是我们忙碌学习生活的调节剂。你是如何支配自己的闲暇时间呢？看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读书报、效游、帮父母做家务？还是……
请你以“My Free Time”为题，描述一个自己的课余生活。
注意：1、要求条理清楚，字迹工整；80个词左右。
2、开头已写好，请你接着往下写。
My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my spare time.                                                
                                                                  
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                                              
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                              

Answer 1

My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time!

解析试题分析；这是一篇命题作文，介绍自己的课余生活。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构，注意运用所给短语。叙述顺序基本按照时间顺序叙述即可，注意上下文的逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。
考点：命题作文
点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。