Question

11．中学阶段你一定读过一些故事书吧，请根据以下问题提示写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的
故事．提示：
1．What is the name of the story and who is the writer？
2．What is the main idea of the story and who are the main characters？
3．Why do you like it？
要求：
1．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3．词数80左右．
I like reading very much．My favourite book is Jane Eyre．It was written by Charlotte Bronte．She was born in Britain．She was a famous writer in the world．She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best．In this book，she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre．Jane Eyre wasn't pretty，but she had a strong idea of self-respect．She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life．I was deeply moved by her story．I like this book very much．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best．她写了很多书，《简爱》是最好的之一．
one of the best最好中的一个
句型二：
She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life．每当她遇到了她生命中任何困难她从不放弃．
whenever 引导的时间状语从句gave up 放弃

解答 I like reading very much．My favourite book is Jane Eyre．It was written by Charlotte Bronte．She was born in Britain．She was a famous writer in the world．She wrote many books and Jane Eyre was one of the best．【高分句型一】In this book，she wrote about a woman named Jane Eyre．（主要人物）Jane Eyre wasn't pretty，but she had a strong idea of self-respect．She never gave up whenever she met any difficulties in her life．【高分句型二】I was deeply moved by her story．（喜欢的原因）I like this book very much．

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．