书面表达。(10分)
假如你叫小明,你在生活、学习中遇到了一些烦恼和问题,请根据以下英文提示写一封e-mail向你曾经的外籍教师Allen征求建议。(15分)
注意:1.邮件的首句已给出。 2.可根据提示适当发挥。 3.字数80左右,不包含已给出的句子.
提示:1. Always have to study. 2. Go to different classes at weekends.
3. Too much homework. –No free time –Feel stressed.
4.Can’t communicate with parents.
Dear Allen,
I have some problems, I really need your help.
Dear Allen,
I have some problems. I really need your help. Now I’m in the Junior 3, the last year of my Junior School. So it is important for me to study well. I must go to different classes at weekends. On Saturday, I will go to the English class. On Sunday, I must go to the art and music class. What’s more, I have much homework every day. I spend 2 hours every day to finish my homework. I have no free time and I feel stressed. And I can’t communicate with my parents because I have no time to tell them my problems. I want to go to a senior high school, but I don’t know what to do with my time and study. Can you give me some advice?
Yours,
Xiaoming
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以小明的身份,将自己学习和生活中遇到的问题和烦恼,告诉Allen老师,向他征求建议。题目中给出了我们写作的提纲,小明的问题有学习任务重,总是要学习,周末也要去上不同的课程,作业非常多,不能和父母交流等。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。教材中我们接触过类似这样的短文,把自己生活中的烦恼,写信告诉某人。这样的短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态,第一人称形式。问题比较多,写作时,要注意将这些问题阐述清楚,还要注意他们之间的连接,使用一些短语或连词,如also, what’s more, and 等,这里可以使短文整体比较连贯。另外,短文中有些内容是可以自己发挥的,要注意发挥的内容贴合文章整体的需要。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者按照题目要求,以小明的身份,把自己生活、学习中的问题表达出来,向Allen征求建议。这篇短文主要有两个优点,一是内容完整,表达清楚。作者按照题目的要求,把小明的问题一一叙述了出来,使用了正确的句型和词汇;而是结尾处比较符合这封信的目的,用问句结束,向老师征求建议。短文中作者使用了不同的短语、句型,使文章表达有层次,意思连贯。文中较好的句型有Now I’m in the Junior 3, the last year of my Junior School. So it is important for me to study well.、What’s more, I have much homework every day.、I have no free time and I feel stressed、And I can’t communicate with my parents because I have no time to tell them my problems等。
考点:话题类作文。
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