Question

19．假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤，请你用英文给他发一封电子邮件．主要内容包括：1．询问病情；2．介绍一下你近期学校活动及学习情况；3．表达祝愿．
注意：
1．字数控制在80-100词左右；
2．不能出现真实的校名和姓名；
3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
How's it going？I'm sorry to hear that．you got injured while playing basketball．You should have agood rest at home．And you'd better take care of yourself when you do sports．
Everything goeswell here!I enjoy great changes in my school．On the one hand，the teachersmake their teaching styles colorful．In my science class，my teacher alwaysencourages us to think，
and cultivates our ability tostudy independently．On the other hand，we have plenty of time to try what wewant to do．We had our School Day last week．There arc different kinds ofactivities，such as speech contest，talent show，volunteering…I took partin the English speech contest，and I won the first prize．I will send you somephotos about my School Day if you like．
Hope you'll getbetter，and be back to your school as soon as possible．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I'm sorry to hear that①you got injured ②while playing basketball．听到你在打篮球时受伤了，我很难过．
①that引导宾语从句
②while引导的时间状语从句，此处省略了主语和谓语you were．
高分句型二：
①On the other hand，we have plenty of time ②to try ③what we want to do．另一方面，我们有足够的时间来尝试我们想做的．
①on the other hand另一方面，常与on the one hand连用
②have time to do sth有时间做某事
③what引导的宾语从句，代指做的内容．

解答 One possible version：
Dear Peter，
How's it going？I'm sorry to hear that you got injured while playing basketball．【高分句型一】You should have a good rest at home．And you'd better take care of yourself when you do sports．【询问病情】
Everything goes well here!I enjoy great changes in my school．On the one hand，the teachers make their teaching styles colorful．In my science class，my teacher always encourages us to think，and cultivates our ability to study independently．On the other hand，we have plenty of time to try what we want to do．【高分句型二】We had our School Day last week．There are different kinds of activities，such as speech contest，talent show，volunteering…I took part in the English speech contest，and I won the first prize．I will send you some photos about my School Day if you like．【介绍近期学校活动及学习情况】
Hope you'll get better，and be back to your school as soon as possible．【表达祝愿】
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．