Question

15．每个孩子成长的背后都离不幵母亲无私的爱，她们在每天工作之余，不但要操持家务，还要辅导孩子学习．作为孩子，我们将怎样报答她们的养育之恩呢？请以此为话题，谈谈母亲对你的爱以及你将如何孝敬母亲，同时表达对她的美好祝愿．
要求：1、写作思路清晰，语言表达准确、流畅．
2、字迹淸楚、工整，字数80～100词．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Like other mothers，my mother is busy working every day．像其他的母亲一样，我的母亲每天都在忙着工作．
be busy doing sth忙于做某事
高分句型二：
To show my thanks，I'll do something for her．为了表达我的谢意，我会为她做点什么．
To show my thanks此处为动词不定式作目的状语．

解答 参考范文：
Mothers'love is the greatest in the world．They do lots of things for their kids．But they never want anything in return．
Like other mothers，my mother is busy working every day．【高分句型一】After work，she does chores for the family，such as washing clothes and cooking meals．She also cares about my study．She often helps me with my homework．She does lots of things for me．【母亲对我的爱】
To show my thanks，I'll do something for her．【高分句型二】First，I study hard in order not to make her worried．Then，I'll help her do some housework when I'm free．What's more，1 will buy a small gift for her on her birthday or Mother's Day．I think she'll be happy．【我将如何孝敬母亲】
In a word，1 love my mother.1 hope she'll be healthier and happier．【对她的美好祝愿】

点评 考生需理解题意，抓住题目要求写的主题，找出写作要点，理清写作思路，采用合适的句型进行写作．