Question

10．根据表格中所提供的信息，写一篇40词左右的短文，介绍林涛的基本情况．

姓名：林涛        性别：男       年龄：13        职业：学生 爱好：喜欢游泳和打乒乓球 家庭成员：祖父母，父母，哥哥和林涛 父亲职业：语文老师 母亲职业：医生

LinTao is a boy，he is 13 years old．He is a student．He likes swimming and playing Pingpong．There are six people in his family，they are his grandparents，his parents，his brother and he，his father is a Chinese teacher，his mother is a doctor．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 He likes swimming and playing Pingpong． 他喜欢游泳和打乒乓球．like doing sth．喜欢做某事．
高分句型二
   There are six people in his family．他家有六个人．这是there be句型，表示某地有某物．

解答 LinTao is a boy，he is 13 years old．He is a student．He likes swimming and playing Pingpong【高分句型一，注意like doing sth．的使用】．【要点一，林涛的个人信息】There are six people in his family【高分句型二，注意there be 句型的使用】，they are his grandparents，his parents，his brother and he，his father is a Chinese teacher，his mother is a doctor．【要点二，林涛的家庭情况】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．