Question

11．根据所给问题提示，以My Favorite Animal 为题，写一篇60词左右的作文．
1  What kind of animals do you like？
2  Where are they from？
3  What are the animals like？
4  What do you think of them？

My Favorite Animals
There are many animals in the world．They are very lovely．My favourite animals are cats and rabbits．I have a white cat．Its name is Mimi．It can catch mice．It likes eating fish．I have a little rabbit too，I call it Lele．It's pink．It has long ears and red eyes．It likes eating carrots．I often play with them after school．They are my birthday presents from my grandpa．They can bring happiness to me．I think animals are our friends．We should love them．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There are many animals in the world．世界上有许多动物．这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二  
I think animals are our friends．我认为动物是我们的朋友．这是一个宾语从句，I think 是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 My  Favorite  Animals
There are many animals in the world【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】．They are very lovely．My favourite animals are cats and rabbits【开头点明主题】．I have a white cat．Its name is Mimi．It can catch mice．It likes eating fish．I have a little rabbit too，I call it Lele．It's pink．It has long ears and red eyes．It likes eating carrots．I often play with them after school．They are my birthday presents from my grandpa．They can bring happiness to me．【正文部分详细介绍最喜爱的动物】I think animals are our friends【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．We should love them．【结尾紧扣主题】

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