Question

9．成都是"美食之乡"，虽然餐馆里美味很多，但我更喜欢在家吃饭．现在，请以The Advantages of Eating at Home为题，写一篇90-110词的英语短文，内容须包括：
1．更干净安全；
2．省钱；
3．再给出一条你的理由，并简要说明；
4．适当的结尾．
The Advantages of Eating at Home
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：句型一：I think eating at home is better than eating outside．我认为在家里吃东西比在外面吃得好．比较级的句子，更具有说服力．
句型二：Home is the best word in the world．家是世界上最美的词．借用家是最好的港湾．说明在家吃饭是最美的事．

解答 The Advantages of Eating at Home
    Choose the place of eating is very important．It will effect our habbit and health．I think eating at home is better than eating outside．【高分句型一】When we have enough time we could cook by ourselves，surely it is more safer and cleaner than having dinners at the resterant．And usually it costs less every months．（为作者的选择做有力的论据）    If you ask me，I must answer"Yes"Although I can eat all kinds of food in the restaurants，I prefer eating at home．I think eating at home is cleaner and safer．I can cook my favorite food by myself．It also can save money．I can share it with my parents．How wonderful it is!After all，the best place in the world is our home．We can enjoy ourselves in our homes．Home is the best word in the world．【高分句型二】（进一步说明在家吃饭是最好的选择）So spend more time at home with your family，please．

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