Question

李雷和他的同学要到圆山去春游。因为春天是爬山的最好时候。天气好，即不会太冷也不会太热。李雷和他的同学骑自行车去圆山，结果在路上，李雷拐错了弯，发生了交通事故，伤到了右腿。所以说遵守交通规则对于我们来说非常重要。 我们平时必须遵守 交通规则。 1. 注意交通灯。红灯停,绿灯行。 2.不要骑得太快，应该靠右边行。3. 骑车要小心，戴头盔。 4. 不能违反交通规则， 否则会被罚款。

We should obey the traffic rules

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

We should obey the traffic rules

Li Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip .Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine .It’s not too cold and not too hot .Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffic accident happened. Li Lei’s right leg was hurt. (His classmates had to send him to the hospital.)So it’s very important for us to obey the traffic rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third, we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffic rules, we’ll get a fine.

【解析】

试题分析：根据题目要求可知本文主要以第一人称书写。在介绍春游及发生交通事故时要用一般过去时，但介绍交通规则时要用一般现在时，并使用情态动词should。可以适当使用序数词使得行文条理。

【亮点说明】本文作者使用序数词逐条介绍交通规则，非常条理。

考点：提纲作文。