Question

书面表达（15分）

现在，越来越多的中学生加入到了志愿者的行列中。他们去走访老人，探望病号，帮助辅导小学生的功课……请你描述一下这一现象，并发表自己对志愿者工作的看法。

要求：1、内容完整，根据所给提示，描述志愿者工作；

2、结构清晰，表达流畅；

3、语言无误，表述得当；

4、80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, volunteer work has become more and more important in our life. _________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Nowadays, volunteer work has become more and more important in our life. Quite a few middle school students join many volunteer groups. They do all kinds of volunteer work to help others. Some go to the old people’s home to help them clean their houses. Some visit the patients in hospital to cheer them up. Others help some primary school students with their schoolwork. Each volunteer brings others help and happiness. And at the same time, when they help others, they get much more. They get thankful words, meaningful experiences and unforgettable happiness. So I would say “Giving is receiving”. Let’s join the volunteers!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时来描写关于志愿者的工作和个人观点。所以在写作时，要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Some go to the old people’s home to help them clean their houses. Some visit the patients in hospital to cheer them up. And at the same time, when they help others, they get much more.并且短文用了一些连词如:when,and等，使句子结构不再单一。

考点：提纲作文。