Question

13．假如你是Bob，请根据下面的提示给你的笔友Linda写一封信．
1．早上6点半起床，然后刷牙，吃早饭．
2.7点钟坐公交车去上学．
3．学校离家有5公里远，要花10分钟才能到达学校．
4．早上8点开始上课．在学校，我必须要遵守规则．
5．放学后，我要去练习弹吉他．因为我想要加入音乐俱乐部．
要求：语言通顺，意思连贯．不能遗漏要点，60词左右．
Dear Linda，
       ．
Yours，Bob．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It takes me about 10 minutes to get to school，classes begin at 8 in the morning．我早上要花10分钟才能到达学校．这是It takes sb．some time to do sth．花费某人多长时间做某事．
高分句型二
I often practice playing the guitar，because I want to join the music club．我经常练习弹吉他，因为我想加入音乐俱乐部．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．

解答 Dear Linda，
How is it going？Now I will tell you something about my life．【开头点明主题】I get up at 6：30 in the morning，then I brush my teeth and have breakfast，I go to school by bus at 7 o'clock．My school is 5 kilometers away from home．It takes me about 10 minutes to get to school，classes begin at 8 in the morning【高分句型一，注意It takes sb．some time to do sth．的使用】．At school，I have to obey the rules，after school，I often practice playing the guitar，because I want to join the music club【高分句型二，注意状语从句的使用】．【正文部分详细介绍自己的学校生活】
What do you think of my school life，see you soon．【结尾紧扣主题】
Yours，
Bob．

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．