Question

7．以My_______为题写一篇60词左右的短文．
要求：
1．补全题目．
2．书写整洁，语句、标点运用、单词拼写正确．
3．若写人物文中不得出现真名．
Myfavoritesports
As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old当我只有五岁的时候我学会了游泳．
when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks虽然一开始在水里我有点紧张，但在我的父母和教练的帮助下，几个星期之后我能游的很好．
although引导的让步状语从句．不能与but连用．

解答 My favorite sports
As we know，sport is an important part of our life．I am interested in sport and I do sports every day．
My favourite sport is swimming．（介绍你最喜欢的运动．）It is a healthy and popular sport．I learned to swim when I was only 5 years old．【高分句型一】Although I was a little nervous in the water at first，with the help of my parents and coach，I could swim well after several weeks【高分句型二】．Now，I am very good at swimming and I go swimming over three times a week．As far as I am concernned，swimming in the water is cool and exciting．During the summer holidays，I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time．（如何进行体育运动）
Swimming makes me healthy and brings me plenty of enjoyment．（运动的好处）

点评 在动笔写作选取材料时，要注意选择自己熟悉的内容．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性