Question

假如你是阳光中学的一名初三学生Simon,你要写封信给青少年专家Sigmund Friend,告诉他你的烦恼，并请求帮助。请根据下列表格中所列的信息，完成一封信。

个人信息	1998年9月10日出生；校足球队成员，喜欢踢足球；最喜欢红色，因为……
性格特点	勤奋，谦虚；有时多虑；注意细节；自信(举一例)……
烦恼	作业多，经常熬夜，睡眠不足，上课疲劳；父母不许我在外面踢球到很晚；他们只关心考试分数，没注意到我的进步，我已经尽力……
愿望	希望得到有价值的建议。

要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。

          2. 要点必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥。

          3. 词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear Sigmund Friend,

     My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. __________                  __

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What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes!

Simon.                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

 Dear Sigmund Friend,

     My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. I was born on September 10^th, 1998. My favourite sport is football and I’m a member of the school football team. I like red best because red is the colour of heat and represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action.

     I’m hard-working and modest. I worry too much at times. I always pay attention to details. I’m confident and I’m never afraid of making a speech to a large group of people.

Now I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to complete the exercises. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class, My parents don’t allow me to stay out late to play football. They care only about marks after exams. They don’t see my progress, but I have tried my best to do it well.

Can you please offer me some valuable suggestions?

What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes!

Simon.      

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料简单。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求写自己的性格和烦恼、愿望。应该用一般现在时。人称用第一人称。注意仔细阅读表格，分析英语的正确表达和句子之间的衔接。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还运用了favourite，pay attention to , be afraid of, too much homework, feel tired , allow … to …, because引导的原因状语从句、动名词作主语，等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如：Now, but等等。

考点：提纲作文。