Question

2．假设你和朋友将在今年暑假，组队参加以"拥抱大自然"为主题的户外拓展夏令营，其中包括小组自由活动．请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案．
提示词语：climb mountains，go fishing，pick fruits，have a campfire（篝火晚会）
要求：1．写明你们组计划要做的具体活动并给出理由；
2．提示词语仅供参考，可增减内容；
3．词数80～100．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名．
We are going for a camp this summer．I'm glad to make a plan for our group．（计划的活动内容及原因）First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise．After that，we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better．What's more，there will be a campfire．We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories．Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？
（期待参与）We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，所给材料限制性小，本文写作要点是：1，计划的活动是什么，2写出安排这些活动的理由，此文是计划打算，用将来时，用第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，注意一些常见句式短语的应用，比如：after that，what's more，so that，I believe…等

解答 We are going for a camp this summer．I'm glad to make a plan for our group．
（计划的活动内容及原因）First of all，we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise．After that，we'll have a fruit-picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better．What's more，there will be a campfire．We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories．Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？
（期待参与）We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together．

点评 第一步仔细阅读提示，思考所给信息，假话文章大致内容，第二步根据信息要求遣词造句，造句成文，第三步，通读全文，纠正错误．