Question

9．在每个人的心中，总会渴望拥有某样东西，你想拥有什么？请以"I want to have    "为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受．
要求：
1．请补全标题，如 a football，a mountain bike 或 a magic paintbrush 等；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．词数80词左右．
I want to havea magic paintbrush
I want to have a paintbrush with magic power．It can make whatever I draw become a reality．
With the paintbrush，I can draw a new earth．There will be so pollution on it．The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue．With the paintbrush，I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family．
I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world．．

Answer 1

分析 本题是要以"I want to have    "为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受．从要求可以得知，写这篇文章时态要用一般将来时或I want/hope/wish等句型，在这里写作要点包括：1．你想拥有什么．2．为什么.3．怎么用或者是你的想法或感受．

解答 I  want to have a magic paintbrush
     I want to have a paintbrush with magic power．It can make whatever I draw become a reality．
     With the paintbrush，I can draw a new earth．There will be no pollution on it．The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue．With the paintbrush，I also want to draw a nice home where people can live happily together like a big family．
     I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．