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17．随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张．请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法．
要求：（1）内容包括   ①分析这种现象产生的主要原因；
②提出解决该问题的具体建议．
（2）字数：60-80字
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名．
I don't like my parents．（父母的表现）They always tell me I should do this，and should not do that．It sometimes makes me angry，“said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question．Why？
（原因）One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things．They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born．All these things are part of your life．They want you to grow up healthily and happily．
So how can you make things easier on yourself？（建议）Just make sure your parents know what you're doing．Get them to know your friends．Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body．Say sorry to them when you make mistakes．Take responsibility for what you have done．Talk about your ideas with them．
Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that．Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children．（总结全文）．

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分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，1．分析这种现象产生的主要原因；2．提出解决该问题的具体建议．
动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．可用词汇如：worry about担心；grow up长大；take responsibility for为…负责任；talk about谈论你；get on with和…相处等

解答 答案：
I don't like my parents．（父母的表现）They always tell me I should do this，and should not do that．It sometimes makes me angry，“said Zhang Hua，a middle school student．Almost every teenager have the same question．Why？
（原因）One of the biggest things is when someone becomes a parent，he/she likes worrying things．They worry about everything about you，from the time you were born．All these things are part of your life．They want you to grow up healthily and happily．
So how can you make things easier on yourself？（建议）Just make sure your parents know what you're doing．Get them to know your friends．Phone if you stay somewhere else so that your parents don't call every hospital in the phone book looking for your body．Say sorry to them when you make mistakes．Take responsibility for what you have done．Talk about your ideas with them．
Most of all，try to think about why your parents do this or do that．Someday，when you become a parent，they may be able to help you how to get on with your children．（总结全文）

点评 用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语．写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想．如果有些单词不会写，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替．要学会善于运用适当的关联词，利用祈使句，情态动词表示建议等，以使作文行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅．．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．