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【题目】写作

据国家卫生计生委通报，近期我国传染病防控形势严峻。作为中学生，为了使自己远离各种传染性疾病，我们日常生活中应该怎样保持健康呢？请以“How to keep ourselves healthy”为题，根据提供的信息和要求写一篇短文。内容要点如下：

1.了解预防传染病的知识，不害怕传染病。睡眠充足，多锻炼。

2.卫生：勤洗手，注意室内通风，不随意乱扔垃圾。

3.饮食：多喝水，多吃新鲜水果和蔬菜，不吃......

4.小心感冒，如果发烧、咳嗽，......

要求：1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

2. 短文必须包括以上要点，但不要逐字翻译，适当发挥使短文连贯、通顺。

3. 短文不得出现正是的人名或校名等相关信息。

4. 参考词汇：传染病 communicable disease

How to keep ourselves healthy

The communicable disease influences our daily life and health. What’s more， it can make people lose their lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?

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If we do like that， we’ll have a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version.

The communicable disease influences our daily life and health. What’s more， it can make people lose their lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?

First， learn some knowledge about preventing communicable diseases and don’t be afraid of the terrible diseases. We should have enough sleep and try to do more exercise. Second， we should clean our rooms every day and often open the windows. We must often wash hands. In public， we shouldn’t spit or throw litter. Next， we need to drink more water， never or seldom eat junk food but eat more fresh vegetables and fruit. Finally， be careful not to catch a cold. If we have a fever or a cough， we must go to the doctor at once.

If we do like that， we’ll have a happy and healthy life.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲作文，首先要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。明确有哪些要点。本文以“如何保护我们的安全为中心”，要求从内容提示要点的四个方面展开写作。要包含提示的所有要点，并适当发挥。短文用一般现在时态，第一人称形式。要注意句型结构的准确使用，使短文连贯，通顺。

写作亮点：本范文包含了提示的所有要点，语句通顺，行为连贯。第一段首先描述疾病的危害，自然引入话题：怎样保护我们的健康？第二段为全文的重点内容，写得详细、具体。本段用first， second， next， finally等等引出各要点，层次清楚。中心突出，主题鲜明。最后简短结尾：如果这样做，我们会过上快乐、健康的生活。点明主旨，突出主题。