Question

13．每个人的成长过程或多或少都会有一些变化，请你以"How much I've changed!"为题，写一篇英语短文，要求80词左右．

How much I've changed
From immaturity to maturity，from adversity to success，everyone's growing progress is a kind of changing one．So is mine．
At first，I was shy and I used to stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class． I only like playing computer games at home．Because I hated English，my English mark is very low in the exam．Later，a girl came to my class，and she changed my life．She became my best friend．She asked me to play outside with others．She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud，to talk to her in English．I also practice English after school．Gradually，My English score was higher and higher．Now，I am a confident and outgoing girl．I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
At first，I was shy and I①used to stay in the classroom②instead of playing with classmates after class．起初，我很害羞，过去常常坐在教室，而不是课后和同学玩耍．
①用used to do sth表示过去常常，来说明自己的过去．
②instead of 表示代替，而不是，of是介词，后加名词代词或动名词，此处是跟动名词；play with sb意为"和某人玩"．
【高分句型二】
I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me．我改变的如此的多以至于很多人愿意和我交朋友．
本句是so…that表示如此…以至于…，that引导的结果状语从句．so是副词修饰这里的形容词much．其中的make friends with sb表示和谁交朋友．

解答 How much I've changed
From immaturity to maturity，from adversity to success，everyone's growing progress is a kind of changing one．So  is mine．（点明主题，引出下文）
At first，I was shy and I used to stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class．【高分句型一】I only like playing computer games at home．Because I hated English，my English mark is very low in the exam．（变化前的样子）Later，a girl came to my class，and she changed my life．（转变的原因）She became my best friend．She asked me to play outside with others．She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud，to talk to her in English．I also practice English after school．（我的努力）Gradually，My English score was higher and higher．Now，I am a confident and outgoing girl．I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me．【高分句型二】（变化后的样子）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．