Question

【题目】书面表达

请用英语表达下面的内容，要点如下：

1. 李明是我的同学，今年14岁，是武汉一中的学生。

2. 他性格比我外向，学习比我努力，英语全班最棒。他爱好读书和体育运动。

3. 暑期将至，他想去游览一些中国著名的景点。

4. 他前几天课后去做兼职，辅导几个小孩学习英语，想挣钱为旅游做准备。

5. 就这件事情，谈谈你的看法。

要求：

1. 不要逐字翻译。 2. 词数60--80字。

参考词汇： 景点sight spots； 兼职part-time job； 准备get ready for

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Answer 1

【答案】

Li Ming is my classmate. He is fourteen years old. He is a student from No.1 Middle School.He is more outgoing than me. He studies very hard and he is good at English. He loves reading and sports. Summer vacation is coming. Li Ming wants to visit some famous sight spots. So the other days he had a part-job. He taught some little kids to learn English after class so that he could make some money and got ready for the trip.

I agree with him. One is that he can make money for the trip himself， he doesn’t have to ask for money from his parents. Second is that he can practice English after class and he can improve his English.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。所给材料内容比较详细，层次清楚，贴近学生学习生活，学生有话可写。我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点： 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上多使用简单句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式、短语，这为文章增添了不少文采，是一篇难得的佳作。