Question

1．学校近期举办征文比赛．请根据以下信息写一篇以"My dream home"为题的文章（80字左右）．

My dream home	1．在山脚下．有三层楼，一楼有家庭影院．前面有个花园，旁边有个足球场
	2．空气清新，环境安静．山上满是花和树，每天能听到鸟叫，闻到花香．
My neighbours	1．乐于帮助别人，经常互相帮助解决各种各样的难题． （举例说明，至少2点，用 if…/when…）
	2．那儿的人像一个大家庭．

My dream homeMy dream home is very big．It is at the foot of the mountain，there are three stories in my house，and on the first floor there is a family cinema．There is a garden in front of it，and there is a football field next to it．The air is fresh and the environment is quiet．The hills are full of flowers and trees．Every day we can hear birds calling．The neighbors are friendly，when someone is in trouble，they will help him，they often help each other solve all kinds of difficult problems．The people there are like a big family．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
there are three floors in my house．我的房子有三层，这是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
when someone is in trouble，they will help him当有人陷入困境时，他们会帮助他．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 My dream home
My dream home is very big．It is at the foot of the mountain，there are three floors in my house【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】，and on the first floor there is a family cinema．There is a garden in front of it，and there is a football field next to it．【要点一，房子的构成】The air is fresh and the environment is quiet．The hills are full of flowers and trees．Every day we can hear birds calling【要点二，环境】．The neighbors are friendly，when someone is in trouble，they will help him【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】，they often help  solve all kinds of difficult problems．The people there are like a big family．【要点三，邻居】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．