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14．前几天，学校一项关于"幸福是什么"的调查显示，大多数学生认为"取得好成绩"、"得到老师、父母的关爱"、"与同学相处融洽"是决定自己是否幸福的重要因素．假如你将在全校升旗仪式上就"What Is Happiness？"为题发表英语演讲，请根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿．
要点：1．介绍调查结果；2．阐述你的看法；3．提出获得幸福的方法．
要求：1．必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥；2．词数100左右；
3．不能出现真实姓名、校名．
What Is Happiness？
                                                        

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
if you want to be a person with a lot of happiness，then try to be like this如果你想成为一个开心的人，尽力像这样做．
if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
Spend more time with them and you'll have more happiness．花更多的时间和他们在一起，你会有更多的快乐、
祈使句+and+陈述句，前一分句表示一种条件或假设，相当于if条件状语从句，后一分句表示一种结果或推论．

解答 What Is Happiness？
I'm standing here to tell you about the result of the survey．Most students think happiness is to get a good score；to get the love of their parents or teachers；to get well along with others and so on．（介绍调查结果）When I receive this answer，I will frown with unhappiness．Are these real happiness？（阐述你的看法）
In a way，if you want to be a person with a lot of happiness，then try to be like this【高分句型一】：
1．Be a kind，helpful and friendly person．
2．Be a person with a lot of smiles．
Well，the more work，the less words，let's begin to work hard now．Try to be a good person，then you will not feel sorry about yourself when you grow up．It's the best happiness for everyone，I think．Work hard is good．But don't forget your friends and your family after work．Spend more time with them and you'll have more happiness．（提出获得幸福的方法）【高分句型二】

点评 这是一篇话题作文．本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是首先用正确的英语把调查结果表达出来，还有给出自己的看法并提出获取幸福的方法．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．