Question

【题目】书面表达

和谐，雨润心田；文明，风暖校园。请结合下面所提供的漫画和提示词，以“Doing Our Part”(从我们做起)为题写一篇短文，内容必须包括：

1．简单描述图中人物行为，并简述你的看法；

2．发表你的校园文明倡议。

提示词：talk loudly；drop litter；save food；get along well with

要求：1.条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子；可适当发挥。

2．文中不能出现校名、人名、地名等真实信息。

3．80—100词。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Doing Our Part

From the picture, we can see that the boy_______________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Doing Our Part

From the picture, we can see that the boy is dropping litter outside the dustbin. The ground looks dirty. I think what he does is wrong.

As middle school students, it is our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful. We shouldn't talk loudly in public. Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school. Never waste food while eating in the dining room. Also we are supposed to get along well with classmates. It's very important to be polite to teachers.

In a word, if we can do our part, we can make a difference to the school.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，根据所提供的漫画和提示词，以“Doing Our Part”(从我们做起)为题写一篇短文。介绍一下图中人物行为并简述你的看法和发表你的校园文明倡议。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意短文中必须包含提示词上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I think what he does is wrong. 我认为他的所作所为是错误的。what he does is wrong.做think的宾语。

【高分句型二】

it is our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful. 表现良好，努力使学校更加美丽是我们的责任。句型：It is our duty to do sth. 做某事是我们的责任。

【高分句型三】

In a word, if we can do our part, we can make a difference to the school. 总而言之，如果我们能尽力而为，我们就能改变学校。if we can do our part是由if引导的条件状语从句。