Question

16．书面表达．
现在国家放开二胎生育，对于是否生育二胎许多人存在不同意见．请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文．

Advantages	小孩不再孤独
	分担抚养老人的责任
	…
Disadvantages	经济压力增大，生活质量提升困难
	一份爱要分给两个孩子
	…
Your opinions	（不少于两点）

注意：
1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3．词数90左右；
4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息．
参考词汇：缓解人口老龄化ease pressure from the ageing population
Today，I'm going to talk abut a change to China's population policy．A couple can have a second child．However，different people have different opinions about this policy．
                                                 

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It is helpful to improve the balanced development of population改善人口发展平衡是有帮助的．
it is+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
they are too busy looking after the smaller child to look after the elder child他们太忙于照顾小孩而不能照顾大点的孩子．
too…to do sth太…而不能做某事

解答 Today，I'm going to talk abut a change to China's population policy．A couple can have a second child．However，different people have different opinions about this policy．Some people who support it think that a couple should have two children at least because their first child feels so lonely when they go out for their work．What's more，they can take care of the elderly together with their brothers or sisters．
For another thing，two kids will help each other，they can share things together．Learning to share things is a very important lesson for children．
In another way，the policy can ease pressure from the ageing population in China．It is helpful to improve the balanced development of population．【高分句型一】（有利的地方）
But some people refuse the policy because they think they can't afford it．They have to pay for two children's education and pocket money．It is difficult for them to improve their life．Sometimes，they are too busy looking after the smaller child to look after the elder child．【高分句型二】
The parents will have to spare more time and effort to look after their children so they can't devote themselves to their work．
Sometimes there are some fights between the kids．It often makes the parents worried．（不利之处）
In my opinions，whether a couple should have a second child or not depends on their family situation．If they can achieve a balance between their own work and their children，I think two children are perfect for a family．In a word，parents should think twice before making a decision of having a second．Only in this way，we can have a peaceful and happy family life．（我的观点）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．