Question

3．如今，随着亚健康的人越来越多，更多的人开始关注健康．你认为怎样才能保持健康呢？请根据提示以‘How to keep healthy'为题，写一篇英语短文来
简单说一下保持健康的方法．
要点提示：
（1）早睡早起（2）适当锻炼（3）平衡膳食
要求：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总次数．
How to keep healthy
Everyone wants to be healthy，but do you know how to keep healthy？
                                           

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．首先，必须要有一个好的饮食习惯．
it is+adj+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
If we try our best，we will be very healthy．如果我们尽力，我们就会很健康．
if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．

解答 How to keep healthy
Everyone wants to be healthy，but do you know how to keep healthy？
First，it's necessary to have a good eating habit．【高分句型一】We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day．We can't eat too much or too little．We should keep the balance．（平衡饮食）Second，we should exercise often to build us up．Try to exercise for half an hour，you can do it twice or three times every week．Doing exercise can help make us strong．（参加运动，强身健体）Third，Staying up at night is bad for our health．If we can't get enough sleep，we may have a headache．（早睡早起，不熬夜）Fourth，try to be happy，because happiness is important for our health，it's the best medicine．（保持好心情，笑对生活）Finally，we must go to see a doctor when we get ill．      If we try our best，we will be very healthy．【高分句型二】

点评 在写作中要注意层次紧凑，开始有总说，最后一段总结，中间分要点分别说明题中给出的要点．用first，second，third，at last显得层次鲜明，逻辑性很强．因为文章是提出建议，所以我们要用许多委婉的表达来给别人提出建议，如should，You'd better等．注意不要出现语法，词汇等的错误，不要出现汉语式的英语．